https://thekoalition.com/2017/house-of-cards-season-5-spoiler-free-review-the-rise-of-a-new-machiavelli Gaming, Entertainment & Tech Fri, 23 Nov 2018 23:49:02 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.1 https://thekoalition.com/2017/house-of-cards-season-5-spoiler-free-review-the-rise-of-a-new-machiavelli#comment-173864 Wed, 21 Jun 2017 01:20:00 +0000 http://thekoalition.com/?p=157919#comment-173864 Please correct all your grammar.
Example sentence:
“Masterly crafted, the writers take devilish pleasure in knowing that everything can fall apart even if one character stumbles.”
1). “Masterly crafted, the writers”… This is a dangling participle. Glad to know the writers are crafted in a masterful way. But what about the script?
2). “…even if…”. or “…if even…” Meaning? What you’ve said is that EVEN IF one character stumbles, hey, all will be fine. What you meant is that all will be lost IF EVEN one character messes up.
So you are beyond typos. You cannot blame this muddle of words on spell-check. This is poor grammar. Clearly you were not paid to submit this piece, but what if someday you decide you’d like to write for a living? Can you put this in your portfolio. No. You cannot.

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